My overarching goal is do something that makes a difference.
Academic Goal To be able to better understand, and to effectively communicate, the degree to which excessive dependence on digital technology reduces human cerebral practice with proprioception, exteroception and interoception. (I love those terms.)
As part of that larger academic goal, I am interested in investigating and exposing the degree to which
the over-use of technology, in and around childbirth, has the potential to cause both short and long-term
emotional and/or physiological problems in mothers and children.
Realistic Academic Goal:
I am interested in doing a rhetorical analysis to show how the conversation in medical science (in peer-reviewed journals such as Medical Hypothesis and the International Journal of Gynecology and Obstetrics) about the safety of digital imaging in pre-natal testing (specifically ultrasound) is very different from the conversation in the rhetoric of the popular media and in medical sites (such as WebMD, advertising for imaging services and hospitals).
(This disconnect between contemporary medical research and the rhetoric of current medical practice is also apparent relative to C-sections and the use of drugs in
labor augmentation and pain relief.)
Embedded in this disconnect is the question of :
Who has the most authority to speak about medicine?
Hypothesis: It is not the researchers who are producing the current science who have the most authority; it is the for-profit institutions that are delivering the services. This is no doubt related to who has access to popular avenues of information distribution, and the best ability to package the information in a consumer digestible form. (It is also, I imagine, related to liability issues for practitioners, who no longer have the option of being wrong, so they opt for the most current technologies to do the work, because for some reason technology is never wrong.)
My conceptual framework is as a 2nd wave, presenthuman feminist* teacher-writer who is interested in cooperating with (and translating), rather than contesting, the partial perspectives of both narrative and empirical stories.
*I do not agree with Donna Haraway that
the goddess is dead (Cyborg Manifesto 301), and I do not agree
with Haraway that the Posthuman Cyborg is a feminist
liberator (Cyborg Manifesto 302), but I also do not believe that
the goddess (as a metaphor for empowered and embodied womanhood) is more important or more powerful than her metaphorical ontological consort. (I think that using an incrementum to weigh gender-worth is ridiculous; it's like using an incrementum to weigh the worths of hot and cold.)
My previous
scholarly investigations, first-hand observations, and lived experience situate
me to understand that unmediated (and
un-medicated) childbirth is far safer than the current media rhetoric suggests,
and that techno-birth is far more dangerous than current media rhetoric suggests. My previous scholarship (some of it conducted
last semester in 597 as part of my final project) confirms this hypothesis.
I also want
to investigate the degree to which a "rhetoric of risk" around childbirth not only
encourages reliance on costly (in more ways than one) technology in this
culture, but is being spread more and more throughout the 3rd world.
Two research
questions are:
- What is the best way to reveal the disconnect between the rhetoric of for-profit institutions and the information currently being published in peer-reviewed journal studies in medicine? My specific focus is on the use of technology in childbirth, specifically the use of digital imaging such as pre-natal ultrasound as standard practice.
- What is the best way to communicate this information to childbearing couples? [Because no matter how effective I am in packaging this work for the field of Composition and Rhetoric, not enough people are willing to read--or are able to understand--the impenetrable discourse in the scholarly stuff we write.]
My
methods will be to:
- Find, Read and Document the birth and breast-feeding conversation in for-profit sites (WebMD, imaging services, hospital protocols).
- Find, Read and Document the medical research conversation about birth and breast feeding (peer-reviewed journal-based).
- Find, Read and Work from sources that investigate similar questions (like the work of Mary Lay, Marika Siegel, Amy Koerber and Robbie Davis-Floyd on the rhetoric of birth, pregnancy and breast feeding).
- Drink wine, make soap and play ping pong regularly to avoid letting this project take over my life.
The validity
concerns I have are that:
I am highly emotional about this topic, and that compromises
my ability to be systematic about studying it.
My tendency is to just want to scream-- and that isn’t persuasive.
Much of the data that I have unearthed--particularly about the relationship of autism to the over-use of technology in childbirth--is new, and it is based on correlation rather than causality.
Much of the data that I have unearthed--particularly about the relationship of autism to the over-use of technology in childbirth--is new, and it is based on correlation rather than causality.
I have trouble implementing any systems consistently (even
recipes) and that compromises my ability to be systematic about approaching any
topic.
What do I want to
gain from the course that will help me in the pursuit of this
research? Most specifically, I'd like to learn more about the
expectations of the genre. I am a writer, with the majority of my
education occurring in the 20th century. I am not opposed to learning
the conventions of producing text (performing text) in digital space,
but it is new to me. I have access to 21st century support systems to
figure some of this out, but I am hoping to learn what the expectations
are for arranging evidence in digital space (since it is not exactly
linear in its presentation) and what constitutes evidence. Also, what are the most productive or persuasive venues? What are the citation or copyright rules for linking to stuff? How do you create a web-site? Yes, I am also interested in the theoretical-conceptional frames, but I challenge conceptual frames that tout a utopian vision (I think we should leave that to missionaries and not to scholars).

Lisa,
ReplyDeleteI always love reading your posts. You put mine to shame. Having taken Kristin's course with you, I know this is a topic that you're continuing to explore, and I think it's really important that you do. Your passion surrounding this subject will surely fuel you to do great things in your research. The only thing I would caution, which you are well aware of and address in your validity concerns is how your emotions play into your research. In your methods I see that you've already begun to find "your people" in the field. In other words, people who are having conversations about what your research questions concern. The next step is inserting yourself into that conversation. For me this is the hardest part. I think you're on the right track and I'm SUPER excited to see this progress further (whether it be in this class or in your doctoral work later on). Rock on!
Lucy
Lisa,
ReplyDeleteI'm in the same boat as Lucy--absolute shame. All the same, you seem to have a wonderful passion for this topic, and I'm excited to see it progress! Upon thinking about areas you could explore further, maybe consider how the technologies are used/designed by/for. For example, these machines are often designed and used by doctors and other medical professionals, allowing for a more a critical discourse surrounding their uses; conversely, these machines are often used and designed for a public often ignorant to the medical risks involved, encouraging a more optimistic (if that's the right word in this context) rhetoric. Are there any other technologies you're considering discussing? Good luck with your project, and, again, I'm excited to see where your research takes you!
Wow. I am extremely excited to see the ways in which your thinking has evolved and become more concrete since last semester. Admittedly, this is an area of research I am not at all fluent in or with, but I do see a lot of potential in untangling the rhetoric of for-profit medical institutions. With that in mind, I might also recommend taking a look at the rhetoric of the liability waivers and instructional manuals that are disseminated to prospective patients regarding the machinery you are scrutinizing here, and how it has developed as medical technologies have become more standardized and normalized. Also, you briefly mention third-world countries in your blog post. I will be interested to see how you integrate these contexts into your overall project. When I was in Cuba two summers ago, I injured my knee and had to go to a medical clinic. They used an ultrasound machine to evaluate the damage to my knee. This doesn't really relate precisely to your idea in this project, but I thought I might share because there's a weird overlap with the machinery you're discussing here. Thank you so much for sharing your project!
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ReplyDeleteYou have a large set of concerns and I think at the beginning stages in terms of Owens' framework, this works, as we will move iteratively throughout the semester. It appears that you have several assumptions about technology and its role both in terms of your own research topic here, but also in general. And while I agree that there is a strong legacy of techno-utopianism out there, there is also a large body of literature, methods, practices that challenge that and do not take technology for granted. This class is meant to focus on the Digital Humanities as a site for exploration so you will need to engage with the theories, methods and practices of DH--and that may end up narrowing your focus and also allowing you to see the topic from different angles.
Yes, I am just slinging clay at this point. What kind of sculpture will emerge at the end of it is a mystery to me. I took Kristen's class (and now this one), because I know nothing of the digital humanities and i figured I might as well learn something new. (I think teachers should always be required to learn something new because it forces us to stay in touch with what it means to not know something). I am, however, beginning to wonder if it was absurd of me to dive into the deep end of the pool (a graduate course), when I have no prerequisite knowledge of DH as a subject (like the meaning of the DH "meme" as compared to a linguistic meme). And I do admit a negative bias-- I have the same bias about guns. I do, however, appreciate alternative arguments. I mean, who am I to be too critical? I use digital technology regularly.
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